Today

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Published by SundaysChild on May 7, 2009 - 15:16
from the ABC set Life is Bittersweet

I wake today
To see my face.
I look behind me;
No shadows in this place,
Nothing to erase.

The darkness goes
When I turn on the light.
Once it didn't.
It stayed, giving me fright;
It seemed nothing was right.

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I love the first stanza - beautiful flow throughout. You're saying a lot in a few words ;)

Magic xxx

Thanks Magic :)

I really like the fact that your poems are so little, but jam packed full of wit and charm. I am envious of your work (:

Beeme xx