These men in suits, these corporate monsters devouring
This sunless sky, building towers to plot destruction
Look above and see the sky the winds are changing
They dream the dreams of other men
Build the pieces to knock them down again
See the paths cut by our grandfathers
Learn the lessons which caused global disasters
Live your life every day
Make room for sorrow, it will never end
Forge your paths to your salvation
Let others see your path so they can walk on
Let the world see what you’re giving
What road are you taking?
Fill the air up with love, clear the clouds and let the sunlight through
See the path for you to walk on
Live life, love all and be no-one’s rival
Comments
Stan | March 7, 2012 - 14:58
With you all the way on this one. Well said.
Just one small typo, I think:
'Life your life every day'
Should the first one be 'live'?
I like your vision of life as you show it through your poetry. Good stuff.
Syphon | March 7, 2012 - 15:09
Well spotted I have amended, thank you so much for your comments they are most welcome :)
Stan | March 7, 2012 - 15:12
You're showing some development in your work in a short space of time. I look forward to reading more.
Syphon | March 7, 2012 - 15:21
Thank you very much, being on this site and able to read other peoples pieces helps greatly and having constructive comments, there are some truly talented writers on here including yourself, I feel in awe at the standard of work submitted on this site.
Stan | March 7, 2012 - 15:41
Thanks, Syphon. It's nice of you to say.
But you're part of it too :)
skinner_jennifer | March 7, 2012 - 16:17
I think you are so right in your views, it's always
about the money, with those corporate monsters.
A very truthfull...honest piece of writing.
Jenny.