The sun defused on glass
The ripples around a whirlpool
The static on the TV screen
The senses switching on and off
DNA and RNA recoiling
Alpha state and awake
Birth and death
kensho
Post modern satori
Published by valiswaverider on April 30, 2012 - 19:13
Comments
Sooz006 | May 1, 2012 - 00:32
I'm not familiar with the format of Satori. I'm guessing it's one of those strict disciplines that is clinical and demands that every word is thought about and every syllable counts. I like it and appreciate the switching on and off of birth and death. If this was art it would be a blood red rose, in a brilliant white vase, in a brilliant white room. Nice writing.