Stronger than the scent of you
Past the glint, the colour of eyes even
Warmer than your sweetest smile
Inviting, reeling me in
Deeper than your skin
Your muscles, your heart pounding
Your fingertips, the lightest touch
Wanting and needing; far deeper than such
Love’s fluidity flowing deep
Deeper than moist desirous heat
Softer than my whispered name
Deeper than the mating game
Beyond fertility; deeper than that ...
Deeper than even Eden’s lap
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | January 26, 2012 - 14:06
I like this, Verdana;-)
Tina
Verdana | January 26, 2012 - 16:14
Appreciate your letting me know. Thanks
ScoZen | April 9, 2012 - 20:21
Ahh, dear Verdana font, with SSS on this one.
What tales you weave and I'm going to catch up with the rest of them soon.
Blessing | April 9, 2012 - 23:55
I'm pretty sure you know how to make one blush ScoZen!
Denzella | June 26, 2012 - 22:56
Verdana,
Not undecided by this one. Much enjoyed.
MOya
Verdana | June 26, 2012 - 23:46
Yeh, I like it too!
magicdarer | August 23, 2012 - 18:32
Intelligent, visceral, gently passionate, and I thought at the end slightly humorous (my reading perhaps flawed). The rhyme is so not in your face, which works. It is really nice to see this love making from what I feel is a female perspective.
Blessing | August 27, 2012 - 17:01
Glad you like it magic.
denni1 | November 12, 2012 - 19:58
Loved it . Dx
Verdana | November 13, 2012 - 01:36
One of my favourites denni1.