The moonlight lights up my room tonight,
and the stars are peeping through the midnight clouds desperately trying to shine bright.
The silence is almost deafening, filling my heart with anguish and fright,
As I lie on your side and bury my head deep into your pillow, I pray for just one whiff, one more touch from the lost love I used to know.
And while I lay silently asking for a sign, that you’re here with me in spirit and in mind,
I listen for your noise, touch or your figure moving in my sight.
But as all hope is drained from me and I realise I’m on my own,
I feel your warm breath on my neck and your arms around my soul.
And with my last breath it fills the cold winter air, I drift of with you to the unknown and leave my broken heart in our bed.
Comments
scratch | December 20, 2011 - 00:30
I didn't like it and then I liked it a lot. The second stanza is excellent.
widdicombe81 | December 20, 2011 - 00:34
thank you scratch, im not sure if i like it either.
scratch | December 20, 2011 - 00:38
No no, widdicombe81, 'arms around my soul' who can't like that?
widdicombe81 | December 20, 2011 - 00:42
thank scratch your comment put a smile across my face, glad you liked it.
ScoZen | January 9, 2012 - 21:47
Hi W81
"...the lost love I used to know..."
Better to have loved and lost, so they say!
widdicombe81 | January 9, 2012 - 21:50
very true, thanks for reading scozen