When the clouds have passed over on this cold winters night,
And the leafs have all fallen leaving no birds insight,
and when life leaves know pleasures just the thorns in our sides,
smile, and remember there is in fact an angel insight.
child
Published by widdicombe81 on November 13, 2011 - 20:41
Comments
ScoZen | November 13, 2011 - 21:45
Interesting little piece.
I hope Paignton has nothing to do with it?
widdicombe81 | November 13, 2011 - 21:48
thanks scozen, im off to read your work, if its like your sense off humor it should be good.
maisie | November 13, 2011 - 21:58
i enjoyed this, the appearance to the eye. However using the same words twice, is a little clumsy.
perhaps could be improved... a theasawus?
widdicombe81 | November 13, 2011 - 22:02
thank you, but yes your right, just something i thought of in five mins.
ScoZen | November 14, 2011 - 00:58
Good to hear.
But just don't expect to much.