Oculus
By Coyote_Mao
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Oculus - Part I
A short story in a somewhat primitive Sci-Fi setting written during a trip to Yucatan peninsula. I've mixed feelings about how this text turned out... So critique and suggestions on how to improve it are greatly appreciated! Please read part II to make heads or tails of the story!
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Oculus - Part II
A short story in a somewhat primitive Sci-Fi setting written during a trip to Yucatan peninsula. I've mixed feelings about how this text turned out... So critique and suggestions on how to improve it are greatly appreciated! Please read part I to make heads or tails of the story!
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