Pamela's Dream

A modern novel in progress, not necessarily in the right order! It's set in Brighton and is in 7 parts. I want honest opinions - the things wrong with it being the most useful. Though I might not agree.

Cherry

Pamela's Dream - Opening

The opening of a new novel.
Cherry

Improved Pamela's Dream opening

Updated version of the opening - the dream has changed to one that fits in more with the theme. New bits coming up