Tiny Tales And Big Ideas

A collection of short stories.

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Coming to this site in 2006 (!) to offer my work in order to get help and improve has been a complete waste of time for me. A few hundred reads and not a single comment left. So, what is the point?

Sorry that you feel that way Neo.  With the greatest respect, you've visited the site maybe four or five times in the last nine years and haven't left commented to any great degree on others' work.  I'm not really sure that you could expect a lot of feedback in light of your own engagement. 

 

 

BUTTERCUP

"Don't you want to get a place of your own and a job." I asked him. He stopped suddenly and sat down. I joined him on the grass. "If I did. I would miss all this." He said. Pulling at his filthy jacket. The sarcasm cutting me like a knife. His tone softened. As if he had relented. "I don't fit." He said, matter of factly. "This world was built by people like you for people like you. I don't see the world the way you do." He paused to pick a buttercup out of the grass. For a while he gazed down at the small, bright yellow flower. Twirling it in his fingers. The light reflecting from it casting a yellow shadow on the dirty skin of his hands. "You see this buttercup?" He asked.