The Twists of Fate

This is a story that I hope to get published. The main character is a young girl named Judith who lives on Mundi. She is forced to hide that she is a girl and that she has magical powers. This her coming of age story.

The Twists of Fate Chapter 1

The Twists of Fate is a story about necessary lies.

Chapter Two Twists of Fate

Is friendship a necessary thing? Please comment on anything; good or bad. I need to become a better writer

Reworked Chapter 1 of The Twists of Fate

The Twists of Fate is a story of necessary lies. Feel free to leave comments; good and bad. I want to grow as a writer and feedback is the only way. :)