Poor Deborah
By Alibi
Fri, 14 Mar 2008
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Deborah’s mind
Was as slippery as an eel.
She even, one day,
Forgot how to feel.
The joy, the pain,
The anguish and love;
All disappeared
To emotional sludge.
She tried,
How she tried,
To bring back the tears
And struggled in vain
To rekindle her fears.
But alas and alack,
No success did she have;
Now poor Deborah’s left
Feeling utterly sad.
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I like this poem and the
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I like this poem and the description given
Good one
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I like it too. The rhythm is
I like it too. The rhythm is perfect. I'd take out 'left' perhaps. Do you really need it? Good job. I will check to see if you have more. Cheers
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