Do you remember?
By threeleafshamrock
Sun, 31 May 2009
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Do you remember that summer?
You - just moved here -
knew no one!
We met;
smitten!
Do you remember that touch?
You shooed a fly
from my brow.
I tingled;
blushing!
Do you remember that kiss?
In the leafy hollow;
the lakeside bench.
Hesitant, brief;
Magical!
Do you remember that love?
It excluded all others;
our eyes only!
So captivating;
complete!
Do you remember that vow?
I vow it still,
I love you,
always will;
promise!
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So Short So Sweet So
So Short
So Sweet
So True
Thanks for the great read :)
Yaz
Yaz
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Awww Happy Birthday to Mrs
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Awww Happy Birthday to Mrs Shamrock! Love this Chris ;)
Magic xxx
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this is sweet, 3leaf...i
Permalink Submitted by Curse of 222 on
this is sweet, 3leaf...i like the structure.
good read. good work.
jason
jason
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Straight from the heart,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Straight from the heart, this, Chris. I am sure you must have brought tears to the eyes of your lovely wife.
Tina xx
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Very good work and I
Very good work and I reiterate Silver's comment, your wife must have loved it. Must be a smiley morning ;)
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