For the kisses you took and didn’t talk of

By span
Sun, 25 Oct 2009
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For the gap when you’re kissing
in your head,
when your breath holds its hiccups
at the closeness of the happening
for the few degrees of incline
the advance of the arch
the arpeggio of answers
you didn’t know you asked for.
To the last thing you looked at
before they leaned in;
lamplight, car park, wineglass,
train seat, kitchen, carpet.
To all the kisses you took and didn’t talk of
each one left a little art.
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Beautiful! love these
Beautiful!
love these lines;
'To all the kisses you took and didn’t talk of
each one left a little art.'
Beeme, Great work xx
k.
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Great stuff. maybe the first
Great stuff. maybe the first word should be 'from', not 'for'? 'from the... to the... each one left a little art'? I dunno. The atmosphere you create is lovely anyway. xx
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Very beautifully painted
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Very beautifully painted words x
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New Span well done on the
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New Span
well done on the lovely cherry
enjoyed this especially lines hiccups
in.I get hatre spider's so he says there's a spider I scream! but the hiccups stop.
julie x cavalcader (;-
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"the arpeggio of answers you
"the arpeggio of answers
you didn’t know you asked for."
Provides food for thought that's for sure!
greetings,
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