Lonely

By vidit.chopra

Thu, 04 Feb 2010
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A fine morning,
A fine thought,
A depressed man,
A torn cloth.
Lonely as he was,
With violated rights and clause.
A person who was my own mirror reflection,
Enough to remind me of my loneliness.
A bitter feeling of being left alone,
A furious feeling of having being let go.
Lonely may be the word that defines me.
I have no one to listen to me,
No one with whom I can be free.
Free to say what I want to,
Free to do what I want to.
No one to talk about things,
No one to answer my ring.
May be it’s the way God wanted me to be,
Lonely is certainly the word that defines me.
All I have,
Is a paper and a pen to talk to,
To write on and to write with.
To play with and to walk with.
Non-living are the only things,
That I am living with.
These inanimate are my life now,
A life worse than that of a pow.
Lonely is definitely the term that defines me.
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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new vidit.chopra This seems sad one has to go out into that world and join things, and do anything try. Mine has re-tired early and heart thing like "Tony Blair" had done he had. So I don't wait or expect to much. May the sun shine on you, go and buy book. anything scenery parks.Just leave it to free will guide you. Iv'e been there to. all the best. julie x

Submitted by vidit.chopra on
Thank you Julie. I am kind of better now. It was just one of those days. Keeps happening to me so I am used to the "LONELY" days now. I am cranked up with studies at the moment so ya should be fine. You see children don't really have free time in India. ;) Thank you for the blessings.! Vidit

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new vidit.chopra Well it was meant in a nice way, I know even married one can get lonely. Relations study, so don't forget all work and no play not good.Some go under? So have that break and mix in.Getting over chest cold.We have lost coffee shop my very first scribble did poem "Angel Face" from magazine,tore out only by name of "Scribbles" on here got me to do.said carries pen and paper. book shop, shops closing,and groups finishing all had. Look at my "Pick up a penguin" maybe get a laugh.and relaxation to soft music done. I have book "Jewell In The Crown" read a bit? Cover is nice Elephant etc:Our daughter and hubby been Thailand and rode on elephants first time loved it.I won't fly ever.Love indain jewellery in shops and floating skirts fashion. Haven't got your book yet.sounds good So many here have helped me. But Editor t.cook Abctales.com Tony good advice good to interact with others, as nothing done further.Now up bit achieved "Pick up a penguin. Let me know how you get on.Or do something hobby never done.I used to toy make in days couldnt get out much.But advanced so much.God bless.What are you studying can you say.Going back rest raed paper. julie x

Submitted by vidit.chopra on
Thank you for the remedies Julie. I really appreciate that. As far as studies go I am just seventeen. I am in 12th standard. We have a board system out here and exams are just round the corner. It's a mad mad world as far as studies goes in this part of the world. About hobbies, well writing is the single biggest hobby I have at the moment. It's good enough to cheer me up. Will surely look at your stories. I think conversing is what I am lacking at the moment. I am not much of a speaker. Quite shy so don't speak much. Maybe that might help. Anyways I am completely fine now. Thank you for the blessing any way. Just wanted to say that you are like a grandmother to me. :) Thank you for the advice and the blessings as well. Vidit.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new vidit.chopra Thankyou replie.Cheeky! Guessed my age, like a mum aye1 Most mine come from esperiences of life and paper stated to long on computers may course depression or could cure it, But our kind Editor answered me t.cook Abctales.com to interact so advice and didn't think my problem? so I manged few hours on comments then stretched my mind and managed try "P-P-P "Pick-Up-A-Penguin" used be a advert t.v but obtained a jacket too hence poem. Please don't think I am telling you what to do.Help. I was exactly same as you at that age! couldn't eat out feel all watching me. Young lad came to work with me in office once, he liked radio on! to mark ledgers! I thought oh! know but helped to add up a/c then.He said "I can't get a girl friend so me? of all people years on said "Yes just be natural. Then later did and was engaged.Plus I went Church homeless and shelter for 7 years terrific help there. So good-night Nanny says.Every day is precious reaching our ages.God bless+ Keep writing up.Pick up phone if you have one ring friend.Walk,paint,jog.etc; have someone visit know well? Hope helps. julie x

Submitted by vidit.chopra on
Sure Julie. After 18 everyone is of the same age + the years of experience from then on. So you are still 18 I guess. ;) Hmmm well there are a lot of alternatives to keep myself occupied. Trying out a few of them. Will surely visit as soon as I am up with this exam thing. Hope is a good thing. It will always help. And as far as writing thing goes well I might be found writing a poem on my own grave. :) Somethings just can't be left. For me writing is one of those. Thank you for the blessings once again. Read the poem "P-P-P "Pick-Up-A-Penguin" Thank you. It was quite amusing. Thanks for the help once again. :) Vidit

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new vidit-chopra Well I wanted it to be funny! With gloom around in paper's. But I did put Try out! and open to all correction's I stand being corrected,it's grammatically wrong!and all comments please. My goodness email Editor t.Cook Abctales and Cherry!another version,of P-P-P "Pick-Up-A-Penguin"- with few word's changed,plus speech mark semi colon's and capitals. If like to accept version. Of Course I accepted his version how kind of him and Editor to help like this. So really the cherry! belongs to him not me. It was mental side to get it right the exclamations, speech ,marks and make stanzas four lines and few word's .I will answer your last one I have read perfectly true.I enjoyed it.Keep writing.bless you.Do read Editor's Story t.Cook Abctales true! great. and comment on it. "Hope In A Strange Corner".to him.Makes one think. julie x

Submitted by vidit.chopra on
Thank you Julie. Well it was quite amusing. As far as the cherry goes well it belongs to you after all it was your original idea. :) Sure I will read his story.