Windover Hill
By shoe
Tue, 27 Apr 2010
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In a golden light, we took the long path,
A blackbird sings his alarm and a pigeon clapped,
The red gold disc of sun slipped behind the brow.
"Quick run" and you became a shadow against the sangria sky.
Breathless, I stood beside you blinking away the black sun spots.
You swore you could see the curve of the earth and reminded me
it's not the sun thats moving, it's the earth, tilting, spinning.
We sat in the long man's hands as if he alone could keep us from falling.
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It seems we both had
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
It seems we both had 'golden' on our minds;-)
A beautiful poem, Shirley and the last line took my breath away.
Tina x
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I agree with, Tina - that
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I agree with, Tina - that last line is something else, Shirley - amazing! I really love all the images of light - the whole poem is glowing, well done ;)
Magic xxx
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I've said it before and I'll
I've said it before and I'll say it again - simply beautiful.
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Wonderful. I liked the
Wonderful. I liked the 'clapped' - I'd never thought of a pigeon's flight like that but you're right. I've never been to the long man - have seen plenty of pictures, but at last now I can imagine sitting there.
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A nice vignette : simple yet
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
A nice vignette : simple yet effective, with a good last line !
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Thanks for sharing a lovely
Thanks for sharing a lovely sunset with you shoe. Kahdai xxx
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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do you perchance give
Permalink Submitted by darkenwolf on
do you perchance give lessons? :)
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