My first sight of knowledge
By Beeme
Sat, 18 Sep 2010
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I try to sit and evaluate each passing moment-
which until now I had under appreciated.
I look out through the French doors, the sun
is rising up until the clouds are emerged in
deep orange, illuminated further by a pastel
violet, settling like mist in the air on a cold
winters morning. I realise, it's the wind who
cries, sighs, breaks its fist against the city's
concrete walls, not just you or I.
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I liked this piece. Well
I liked this piece. Well done. A brilliant take on the IP- great knowledge that it is not only you and I
;)
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An inspiring poem Beeme,
An inspiring poem Beeme, beautiful!
'I realise, it's the wind who
cries, sighs, breaks its fist against the city's
concrete walls, not just you or I.'
“We are alone and not alone in an unknown world; our joy
and suffering are forever shared and yet forever our own.”
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Hi Beeme, This was a lovely
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Hi Beeme,
This was a lovely poem, it was good to look at life
from a different perspective.
Jenny.
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Another poem the wind cries!
Another poem the wind cries! Its lovely & beautiful, colourful image you make for me! K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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Simply stunning! Gorgeous
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Simply stunning! Gorgeous imagery - love it :)
Magic xxx
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what can i say? just re-read
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what can i say? just re-read the other comments they cover it all!
well done
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It’s a pity not all our
It’s a pity not all our work is always brilliant. Not to detract anything
from your others.
I try to be consistent it’s not always easy.
If poetry was love I’m crushed
Nolan
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