Shadowy collection
By Bradene
Tue, 23 Nov 2010
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10 comments
In the shadows
he collects
creamy thighs,
long white necks.
Then a token
to remember
how it felt
to dismember
all those gory
artifacts
for others to find
in woodland tracts.
A silver ring
a piece of lace,
with each small thing
his pulses race.
He takes great pride
in his collection
and hopes he may
avoid detection...
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Gritty and sinister - but
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
Gritty and sinister - but absolutely enthralling! A great read , well done!
Magic xxx
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Yes sinister. I may have him
Yes sinister. I may have him under suspicion of being a pervert. Hmm sorry well written
Pia ;)
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Grizzly, to say the least;-)
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
Grizzly, to say the least;-) Nice one, Val!
Tina x
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Really well crafted Val -
Really well crafted Val - each word seems a definite choice which makes it all sit together so well. Fab. :-)
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And really good to have you
And really good to have you back and on such fine form!
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