White Lies
By Beeme
Mon, 06 Dec 2010
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'What I believe, I'll wail'
-Macbeth
You hate this time of year
when the leaves free- fall from trees
abandon their homes, displace order.
You despise the fading sun
in the earlier hours of dusk,
denying natures law.
Take it as a sign- a bad omen.
You cannot understood
that people change,
sometimes for the better,
sometimes for the worse.
You fear the trees
caped in frost, frozen-
crystallising a moment in time.
Proudly displaying; the unscheduled weather.
With no rules or prophecy.
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I love this one Beeme, it's
Permalink Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I love this one Beeme, it's beautifully written
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This is fantasmagorrical,
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
This is fantasmagorrical, Beeme,!! Well done on the cherry; well deserved.
My favourite lines:-
"You fear the trees
caped in frost, frozen-
crystallising a moment in time."
More than enjoyed;-)
Tina xx
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Really excellent, I love the
Really excellent, I love the last two lines especially, but the whole poem is superb.
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This is so beautiful, Beeme.
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This is so beautiful, Beeme. And it has a sort of haiku-esque grace to it - very zen! Well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
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I really like this one too!
I really like this one too! x K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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