Sunny
By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 27 Feb 2011
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Don’t play me no blues no more;
no Gershwin, no Coltrane.
Don’t make that sax talk no more;
put it back in its suitcase.
Don’t gatecrash my dreams no more
‘cos you ain’t been invited,
nor spring to my mind no more
when the moon’s shining brightly.
Don’t strum that guitar no more,
‘cos this heart just can’t take it,
nor pick on those strings no more...
there’s a chance you might break it.
Don’t send me no flowers no more –
almost ten days belated;
or give me that shit no more
you forget what the date is.
Don’t blind me with lies no more,
‘cos I’ve seen what the truth is.
Your ‘Sunshine’ I ain’t no more...
I am what the blues is.
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I like this Tina -
I like this Tina - definitely a performance piece you can really hear it if you know what I mean. :-)
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agree with fatboy. also like
agree with fatboy. also like the ending 'i am what the blues is' yes!
cheers,
jose.
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this is lovely tina. very
Permalink Submitted by jonahs cough on
this is lovely tina. very emotional and with great rhythm. it does deserve a performance. thanks for the read.
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Hi Tina, I totally agree
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Tina,
I totally agree with fatboy, definitely one of those
pieces that needs to be read out loud.
Great stuff.
Jenny.
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Another nice poem. I always
Another nice poem. I always liked Coltrane over Gershwin, but that's just splitting hairs.
barryj1
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I agree, this is lovely. I
I agree, this is lovely. I really like this :)
Beeme xx
k.
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