Winter
By David Maidment
Tue, 26 Apr 2011
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Cold stunts growth.
The outer dumbness of the air
Invades my inner parts
And makes less bold.
The cold are still.
The frozen lake ne’er ripples in the wind,
The bitter sentry huddles o’er his task.
Kill the winter cheer.
The poet sings a soulless song
And music writes an icy score.
The beauty of the frosted tree
Is but tinsel; cold is ugly.
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Hi David, Did you mean
Hi David,
Did you mean "dumbness" in the second line and if you did can you elaborate a little on what you are alluding too.
I love the lines "The beauty of the frosted tree
Is but tinsel"
kheldar :--)
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Now you've said it I
Now you've said it I completely get what you're trying to convey - sorry about that, it does however make my thoughts on this poem complete: i think it is excellent.
kheldar
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