valley of the damned

By seannelson

Sat, 28 May 2011
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the serpent rods
and the satellite Gods,
hospital halls
and sunflower walls,
the constant flow
of caffeine lifeblood,
the corporate moon
and the judicial sun,
little white pills to keep away
despair Armageddon

where did it all
go wrong?

Certificate U
Poem
Opinion

Comments

Submitted by maisie on
That paints a complete picture. Makes me wonder if I've been there...

maisie angel Guess what?  I'm still alive!

Submitted by Mangone on
Maybe it all went right, Sean :O) I'm thinking along the lines of; the exams are almost over and it looks like a hell of a lot of people failed... but that's the point of good exams. Obviously I meant the Armageddon exams not the medical ones

Submitted by Highhat on
A lot said in a few words. Another good one Sean. ;)Pia