Just Too Say

By prettyrose

Sat, 06 Aug 2011
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I cannot count the hours,
My fingers have touched,
The phone and called you.
Or how many times I put,
Your Clothes in the washing
Machine. Or set 3 places for
Lunch.

It still sends shivers down my spine,
Too remember you were stolen,
From our family zone,
Even after these long, drawn out years.
Your always our child,
Never Forgotten.

You never stop worrying about a child,
Whether they at school,the ex's,
A friends,College,University or,
With others, or simply wondering,
Alone out in the cold.

But we will not rest,
Our sweet child,
No matter how many hours
We have to walk, talk or drive,
We will never stop looking.

So if you
Ever wounder where we are,
It's simple, We're always
Going too be,a palm hand apart.

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Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
Great Prettyrose- you might want to look at Just to say- (you don't need the extra o) and you're not your this is such a lovely evocative poem. well done you keep writing ;D ;)Pia

Submitted by prettyrose on
Hi Highhat for your time and comments, always a pleasure to have :) I will look at them thank you. I may change it around a bit. Take the we will never rest from the middle paragraph and put it with another 1 like below maybe. Alone out in the cold, But we will never rest Looking for you, so if you Ever wounder where we are, It's simple, We're always Going too be,a palm hand apart. But not sure yet lol. Keep Writing too :))) thank you!!! Keep Smiling :)))

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