You need a ride, little girl? ..
By denni1
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The place looked like an abattoir
After the man finished with her
His face, a grisly, sweating mess
Ecstatic at his butchering best
He somehow managed chopping off
Her hands and feet, then headless corpse
Was stuffed into thick plastic bags
Those ones with pull-together tags
He'd figured out, then put her in
An almost full, huge restaurant bin
They got emptied every day
Then dumped in landfill, far away
These killers don't research at all
As, fitted discreetly on a wall
CCTV detected him
Disposing said bags, with a greasy grin
The biggest van reversed that day
With warning peeps, 'Get Out The Way'
It wasn't easy, lifting up
Receptacle swimming in guts
But off they roared, his deed was done
He disappeared to carry on
His favourite pastime, slaughtering girls
Who favour drugs, ten quid a whirl
Will fix her up for a short while
And give the men a shuddering smile
Be careful out there. Y'hear?
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Wow denni1, powerful stuff!
Wow denni1, powerful stuff! A couple of typos perhaps to sort out:
"The place looked like an abbatiore (abattoir)"
Should the last line of the third stanza be "Then dumped in landfill, far away"?
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jeez that's strong. but very
jeez that's strong. but very very good. great rhyming too. and vivid imagery. almost too vivid...
brilliant workx
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