'All That Jazz'
By Silver Spun Sand
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Maybe the first thing about
Maybe the first thing about making the most of a day is to see it with fresh eyes of wonder. Rhiannon
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What a gorgeous word painting
What a gorgeous word painting, embracing life. Beauty in the small details of life.
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The image of the fishes of
The image of the fishes of fingers being washed in a bowl got me as much as the wonderful assonance. Yes, turn that bed to face the garden so the now can be fully appreciated. Lovely poem, Tina. Positive, yet empathetic and sad.
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Wonderful words of wisdom in
Wonderful words of wisdom in this poem Tina. I like that you mention each living breathing thing; even insects crawling over stones. We shouldn't ever forget the tiny creatures.
Very much enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
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Each of us is a miniscule bit
Each of us is a miniscule bit of the universe... and that tiny bit is is conscious of the entirity which is unimaginably vast... and our time is so short here that every second of day should be used to absorb whatever we can ...
intriguing poem!
Terry
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