EBOLOWA 40
By simonmiller15
Wed, 27 Apr 2016
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A much revised version of EBOLOWA will be on sale in book shops and online at Unbound.com.
Details to follow as and when.
many thanks meantime to readers at ABC
and good luck.
simon
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well, I once said I didn't
well, I once said I didn't trust anyone called Emile, so I guess it comes into that catergory.
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Really good fast moving,
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Really good fast moving, tension.
Sentence - He too fast..... Would read better if you truned it around -' Slightly hunched....down to - took quick jerky strides.' Jerky not jerking.
'It rattled in her hand'. Don't need trembling.
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