on the way to the letterbox

By Di_Hard

Tue, 22 May 2018
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On trees, sky high blossom's

pure, untouchable pink.

 

Fallen, fresh soft coolness

mixes with dust and thorns.

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

So many different ways this could be read - very clever Di!

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

thankyou Insert. To find meaning in something so slight is clever

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, I really liked that - just thinking of the lovely blossom simply. Short lived, but still lovely as you describe when it first falls, before trampling and mixing with … . Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou so much Rhiannon. Am always wanting to write about it but find words keep seeming too heavy.