Mid-Wales Haiku?

Cherry

By Rhiannonw

Thu, 30 Jun 2022
  • 1403 reads
13 comments
 

Soft green lumps of hills
surround the valley basin.
Look far from the ridge.

The picture wasn't quite what I wanted, but the verse covers many such areas there probably.

Certificate U
Poem
Countryside explorations
Nature
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

Such a lovely view with a great haiku. Sorry just had to add a bit of rhyming there. wink

The poem goes very well with the photo Rhiannon.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jenny, and for your rhyme!

I had in mind a more barren spot, with more distant hills, but I think taking a photo there of the whole thing would have been difficult, too much of a sweep. That's where you can get more in a few words' description! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

How on earth (!) to you gat such a sense of space in so few words? I loved this

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Di. So glad it worked for you! I haven't often tried the form, but somehow the brevity did seem to emphasise the spaciousness! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by marandina on

Very nicely done, Rhiannon. Haiku's can be tricky but you have made it look easy here. Paul 

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Paul. It came unusually, and seemed to benefit from brevity. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you for the cherries. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Rhiannon

I remember that area when my husband and I spent time reseaching relatives. Your haiku describes it concisely

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Jean. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by jeand on

Thanks editors for the lovely cherries.

Jean Day

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Jean, I guess you meant this to go on your piece! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by T. Imaan Tretch... on

Lovely.smiley

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you! Rhiannon