busy gnomes by stacyt

Stacy, I liked this one even better than your SOW – congrats for that, by the way. But I didn't like this line: ...sit here on the deck sipping a stolen Corona, sans lime. Papa would shit bricks if he knew. To me, that didn't fit in with the rest of the story. But on the whole, I thought this was really well done. foster.

yeah, i'm not loving that line either now that i look at it. well thanks...this was an unexpected response. i do love writing from prompts because there is no pressure and you can be as goofy or serious as you like. all good stuff and useful for keeping your joints loose.