Revolutions - Chant

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Revolutions - Chant

http://www.abctales.com/story/chant/revolutions

I liked this alot. It conjures the sci-fi world all the better for its spareness. I like the way this poem gives weight to fairly mundane emotions by placing them within a fantastic scenario. And, as per usual, the language is very controlled and the final image is perfect. Lovely.

Joe

Magnifique! Chinese sci-fi? What a concept!
Loved how so many images can walk in so few lines, great!
hey Joe, thanks for starting the thread, Jack, Lisa, thanks for commenting. :-)

 

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