Jack Cade: I identity swallows

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Jack Cade: I identity swallows

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Really really good read Jack Cade,
really clear.

Love the coffee and the grey suit and the pushing out of the office and up into outside.

Not sure about the underbelly of the mother ship?
I reckon it takes it another direction entirely.
Or maybe I am reading it wrong?

Span

Yes, I would like to explain myself. I always keep in mind, when writing, the distant shape of collections, and what might make them more interesting than strings of good poems. That's not to say that the string of good poems is hard enough in itself - but I'd like to be prepared, should I ever emerge into the exalted ranks of poets who can put together such things, to be different. So, basically, as my poems seem to be veering towards scenes of sci-fi and fantasy crossed with the more usual benign-made-intense, I thought I'd go back and rejig some old ones to have a bit more of that element. This poem I thought might make a good opener to a collection that then includes stuff like Muswell Hill Time Travellers, Side Effects, Citizens!, I Want To Be A Spy etc. Enjoyed your poem earlier, Spantastic. Last stanza is very strong, and unnerving too. And Spacknificent's, of course. And I've been reading some of that new DavidWarrior chap too, and Appolienia has put up some crackers. You'd never think I was at work.
ah, me see. Well, I will go back and have a read in the context of the others. Cheers Jon. There are some really excellent submissions, if only work knew how much they were paying (actually, not very much at all) me to look at poems and short stories. H eh ehe he he. Right, back to work, the darkness is spreading. Span x
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