The husband, the wife and the wardrobe

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Thu, 2006-01-26 13:37

http://www.abctales.com/story/luigi_pagano/the-husband-the-wife-and-the-...

This made me laugh. I always like it when people play with conventions, and this is a nice take on the traditional breaking up poem.

Thu, 2006-01-26 15:00

Brooklands

This gets my approval from the title alone. Joe

Thu, 2006-01-26 19:53

Juliet OC

great idea, reads well - definetly made me smile. Juliet

Juliet

Thu, 2006-01-26 20:01

southern belle

Heheh...very funny. I love the title as well. ^_^

Fri, 2006-01-27 14:44

Foster

congratulazioni! complementi - era stupendo!

Fri, 2006-01-27 19:35

Jack Cade

Echo what others have said about the theme, but I found the rhymescheme frustrating. Either it's arbritrary or my brain isn't working tonight. I do also feel like it needs a punchier ending.

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