aridity in the garden
By seannelson
Mon, 25 Jul 2011
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the good goes hand in hand
with the bad
like the rocky coast
where the sea meets the land,
the Fall breeze blowing bright leaves
into winter's icy hand
the good goes hand in hand
with the bad
education with depression,
adventure with folly,
feast with famine
bloody thorn with pretty women,
aridity with verdancy,
arrogance with success
wine's flight with the dregs of excess
the good goes hand in hand
with the bad
and we live our lives
as best we might:
journeys that never arrive
the picture being never quite right
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I really like this
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I really like this
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Me too, Sean - this is just
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Me too, Sean - this is just brilliant :)
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A nice observation that
Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on
A nice observation that rolls along. Good.
Parson Thru
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great with the contrasts and
great with the contrasts and the questioning- I agree that we are not sure or rather we are pretty certain that the good will always come with the bad.- arrid and verdant- great images Sean- another belter of a poem from you.
;)Pia
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