RE: The Farm

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Thu, 2012-05-24 20:03

RE: The Farm

Topic posted in response to The Farm : my http://www.abctales.com/story/alexislebaroudeur/farm
Hello

I would like to know if this is structured enough. Are the main character's actions clear? What can I do to improve upon clarity?

Thanks

Thu, 2012-05-24 20:18

alexislebaroudeur

I have to precise that I'm 17 and that I don't really know how to proofwrite my work How can I go through my text, what tools can I use to edit myself?

Fri, 2012-05-25 15:43

oldpesky

Hi alex, welcome to abctales. Try copying and pasting your work into here. It's not perfect but it's a great place to start. Best of luck. http://prowritingaid.com/Free-Editing-Software.aspx

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