You Tube and back ground.

By maisie

Tue, 01 Aug 2017
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Okay, the poem was written on a train home from London, in a crowded carriage when I was sharing a table seat with an athletic younger man, who was on his way in to talk to his intended.  We had great fun slanging puns etc at each other -  I walked away feeling years younger and not in the mood I wrote the poem in.  So here I am glad I met him -  and I hope you will go have a look at this poem - 

"All 2 days!"

and if you've time please do answer the question that pop up just before the end. Thank You!

https://youtu.be/rsthdaeG6hE

 

 

Certificate 12
Poem
ElasticBand
Philosophy

Comments

Submitted by Stephen Thom on

Enjoyed this, great, thought-provoking poem and very well read, seems v natural. The alliterative moments came across well in the narration. Great idea to video, adds a lot. If you could get a wee stand/camera stationary you'd be winning. Top work yes