Tears or Rain

By Basket case

Sat, 28 Feb 2015
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4 comments
 

The sky is splitting
tearing with my heart
 
the new year's tears
drenched my soul
through my heart
 
I wish
tomorrow of tomorrow
the sky will be blue
 
breeze will free my soul
sunshine will warm my heart
 
I am waiting
waiting for the wind 
waiting for the sun
 
to save
my dying heart

Certificate 12
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Comments

Submitted by tibi popovici on

I find very good, basket. I feel a note of sadness, of an end to come..., but it is so strong.

Submitted by Basket case on

thanks, glad to hear that you have strong feeling when you read it, it really contained a lot of sadness.

My country is raining for weeks, makes me more upset when i look back the past, really hurt...

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Submitted by Philip Sidney on

Full of sadness and yearning for improvement.

Submitted by Basket case on

thanks for your reading and comment, philip

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