Searching

Cherry

By Beeme

Mon, 17 Jan 2011
  • 2363 reads
17 comments
 

Dark blue
break of day
white lights
smudge the
horizon

the sun-
a minute
boat skimming
the surface
of air,

searching,
gripping
the changing
tides
for any
sign of
you.

Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by ScoZen on
Hello Beeme. Charming. I see this most mornings when I wake up. "...break of day white lights smudge the horizon..." I'm sure you will find that elusive person when the tide turns in your favour. Regards.
ScoZen

Submitted by Beeme on
Hi ScoZen, I'm really glad you enjoyed. I hope the tides do just that, thanks very much again :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by seashore on
You have a very distinctive style, Beeme - it's very appealing. This is another good piece.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so much seashore :D Glad you enjoyed Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much SundaysChild :D Glad you enjoyed. Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by shoe on
Enchanting imagery, I love the minute boat Sun skimming the surface of air.

 

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you so much Shoe, glad you enjoyed :) I think that's my favourite part too :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by tcook on
Nice piece but I suspect you mean 'gripping' not 'griping'.

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Tony and yeah I do :) Beeme

k.

Submitted by tcook on
Ah - that's better. Cherry duly awarded!

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme Really lovely lines stanza Searching gripping the changing tides for any sign of you congrats: the cherry! Hope the tides turn for you. julie xx

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Tony! Beeme

k.

Submitted by Beeme on
aww thank you Julie, much appreciated :-) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Geertje Jong on
Lovely, fluid and clear. Geertje

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much :) Beeme xx

k.

Submitted by Kahdai on
ah wow Beeme ii very liking your recent ones! K xx

"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "

Submitted by Beeme on
Thank you very much Kahdai, your praise means a lot :) Beeme xx

k.