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By big stu

Mon, 20 Jul 2015
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Apologising had left her in bits

Saying sorry had just been the pits

She wasn't to blame

But attacked all the same

To surrender just got right on her tits!

Certificate 15
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Submitted by EB on

I don't know if this is meant to be serious poetry, but if it is, that last line has got too many syllables. I'd remove 'just'.