Vomit City
By Mentalelf
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Vomit City
I was stumbling home
the rain had turned to hail.
Ahead staggered a woman
Spewing in the gutter
Looking very pail.
So I lifted her from
The sodden ground
and said I’d walk her home.
She pointed out and mumbled
And off we went on her trail.
We came to a dark door
Behind was sounds of cheer
She asked me in
“Come and have a beer”.
The house was full of people.
I didn’t know even one.
Couples touched in corners
Sexuality.
So I opened up a can
And started looking at her books.
They were all full of murder
Mysteries and loss.
Cheap pulp that blinded me.
And the music was loud and shit.
She smeared her lips
Across my face I could smell the puke.
She asked me to come and fuck her!
We staggered up the carpetless stairs.
I wasn’t really ready.
So I wasn’t disappointed
When she fell asleep.
I quietly walked out
And round the corner home.
I really hadn’t lost anything
And slept with a clear mind.
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very pale (not pail, which is
very pale (not pail, which is a bucket, but it does fit in with yoru theme). gritty poem.
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I like it, especially the
I like it, especially the murder novels. I felt it could have gone in a more sinister direction but at least you came away unscathed.
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