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My stories

Cherry

Sparrow

By Bee on Fri, 18 Dec 2015

Unclassified
Poem
Certificate 18
Cherry

Life is a Book of Apologies

By Bee on Sun, 13 Dec 2015

Unclassified
Poem
Certificate 18
Cherry

Flesh in Profile (poetry monthly)

By Bee on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

it's FLASHED bits of tits accidentally visible in SHOCK - ing moments of mother baby intimacy that often angers Joe Public more than porn does
Rant
Poem
Certificate PG

Result! part 2.

By Bee on Sat, 05 Dec 2015

?
Autobiography
Story
Certificate U
Cherry

Result! (part 1)

By Bee on Fri, 04 Dec 2015

Feeling thankful!
Autobiography
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288 of my comments have received 274 Great Feedback votes

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'Abortion is a privacy issue.

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

'Abortion is a privacy issue. An unwanted baby is like an alien living inside of your body.' 

As an entire piece of writing, I found it somewhat lacking in understanding as it seems to imply that this - 'An unwanted baby is like an alien...

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Posted in Abortion

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It's just perfect.

Posted on Tue, 04 Aug 2015

It's just perfect.

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Posted in Elephant Song

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Heartbreaking last line in an

Posted on Fri, 07 Aug 2015

Heartbreaking last line in an honest hearted poem, Tina. Some feelings never leave, and guilt has a nasty habit of clinging on the longest, whether right, or wrong.

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Posted in For What it's Worth...

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That dress did me in, Tina.

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015

That dress did me in, Tina. And I loved -

'her ancient Aran jumper...
... it might unburden me...at least
be a vehicle for my grief...
 
but when I open the door...see its arms folded 
across its chest in...

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Posted in Clothes-Speak

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Excellent characterization

Posted on Sun, 02 Aug 2015

Excellent characterization and a brilliant storyline leading to an unexpected multilayered ending with extended implications.

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Posted in Lisitskiaia's Quarter

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Such an uplifting poem, Tina,

Posted on Sat, 01 Aug 2015

Such an uplifting poem, Tina, and filled with appreciation of the simple things in life that remind us of so much more.

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Posted in Ten Things I Love...

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I like Erin's introduction

Posted on Thu, 30 Jul 2015

I like Erin's introduction using the cat which opens up the reason for the lonliness. Her personality is there, too, through her would be responses. I liked this.

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Posted in Why I Live Alone

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What an amazing flow of

Posted on Tue, 28 Jul 2015

What an amazing flow of poetry in prose. Excellent! Neatly worked story, too.

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Posted in Mandragora's Curse

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A moment captured in a flash

Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2015

A moment captured in a flash of carefully chosen words.

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Posted in Flypast

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It was the day

Posted on Sun, 26 Jul 2015

It was the day
I went down to the kitchen –
the thin skin of the night 
peeling back, '                    

That's exquisitly delicately worded, Tina. And the following words are more heartbreaking for their matter-of-...

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Posted in Chess

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