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Cherry

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By Bee on Sat, 14 Nov 2015

Old - never!
Miscellaneous
Poem
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Cherry
Poem of the week

Breathed - (poetry monthly)

By Bee on Fri, 13 Nov 2015

For Stephen on the day of his funeral, with love and fond memories from me xxx
Love
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Writing It Off

By Bee on Thu, 12 Nov 2015

I sometimes wonder what I'm doing writing all this drivel, troubling others with problems that should remain dignified and private. Why bother when...
Autobiography
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The Last Third Thursday

By Bee on Wed, 11 Nov 2015

Last one.
Autobiography
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If You Get Cancer

By Bee on Wed, 11 Nov 2015

Rant
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288 of my comments have received 274 Great Feedback votes

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I loved reading this. It was

Posted on Mon, 06 Jul 2015

I loved reading this. It was brought to life by the use of the clock - perfect and easy for anyone who's been on to picture. I got taken on as a present (unwanted because I know I hate being trapped in enclosed spaces). At the end of the queue, I...

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Posted in My London Eye Experience

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A great picture of how it was

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015

A great picture of how it was - taking care of reality - seen through the eyes of someone who also hoped for better. 

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Posted in Women of Small Histories

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You capture the composite

Posted on Sat, 04 Jul 2015

You capture the composite scene so brilliantly here, Luigi, and the viewer's own feelings on interpreting what he sees. Reading it, I had a strong feeling that it would work / read better broken into stanzas. But that's not your style, and who am...

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Posted in A View from the Top (Poetry Monthly)

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Perfect meter, and a

Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015

Perfect meter, and a strangely wistful and loving feel. It is clever because it's so faultlessly written, capturing an elusive mood, fitting the theme. Really well done - wish I'd written it myself. Love countdown.

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Posted in Countdown

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Yes, but it's about a fly.

Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2015

Yes, but it's about a fly.

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Posted in Going Round in Circles

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So delicately sculpted, this

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015

So delicately sculpted, this bleeds beauty and tugged at the strings of my heart, Tina.

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Hi Ed. I love that tree

Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015

Hi Ed.

I love the picture of that tree crossing into winter - very appropriate. The poem has that same feeling of waiting to cross over - life is a moving picture on the other side of a window. You have captured two contrasting atmospheres...

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Posted in Waiting

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This is great - fascinating

Posted on Sat, 20 Jun 2015

This is great - fascinating and absorbing. I think inserts idea would tighten it up as a short story - make it feel less meandering in places and padded, but it is brilliant, and stirring, emotionally. I love it.

'People try to press and...

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Posted in Reprieve (please stay here with me)

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That grief can be good - in

Posted on Fri, 19 Jun 2015

That grief can be good - in certain cases. I saw it as violence - not so much from another, but perhaps - chair smashes window then she jumps. All heard from the child's  room.

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Posted in Good Grief

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Yes, lovely. Not eating it,

Posted on Wed, 17 Jun 2015

Yes, lovely. Not eating it, though - it cheers me up just looking at it.smiley

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