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The Flounderer
Was she?
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Like What We Was
From fear...
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Are you procrastination? It's
Posted on Fri, 23 Oct 2015
Are you procrastination? It's a really good poem, by the way.
or are you just waiting for someone to tell you who you are coz you don't know yet?
Read full commentPosted in Who am I?
I'm guessing by 'aspire to
Posted on Thu, 22 Oct 2015
I'm guessing by 'aspire to imitate', his kids were doing their best to please the 'you' spoken of by the narrator, but he doesn't appritiate it. Speaks like the narrator is also the son.
Read full commentPosted in Legacy
This is wonderfully pared
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2015
This is wonderfully pared down to the bones, but also retains the delicacy of the broken China, which is the self of the narrator, broken and fixed one too many times.
Read full commentPosted in Porcelain
Soothing fantasy to dream of
Posted on Sun, 18 Oct 2015
Soothing fantasy to dream of forever - pill free, and pain free at the end of life's long day.
'Let’s go there, right now, down to Oyster Bay
Read full commentwhere the sea paints a picture of dawn
with a palette of colours it stole from the...
Posted in Oyster Bay
So simply and plainly put,
Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2015
So simply and plainly put, Rhiannon. Made me think what it's like to exchange one terror for another with only the chance of it working out for the best. Very real and thought provoking.
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Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with
Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015
Lovely, Rhiannon. Filled with hope, faith, love and appreciation.
Read full commentPosted in “The joy of an Indian summer*”
Clever and fun, with a point
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015
Clever and fun, with a point to it. I really liked this word play.
Read full commentPosted in Tell-tale Tit!
Wonderful!
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
Wonderful!
Read full commentPosted in For the gap
Cleverly woven piece,
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
Cleverly woven piece, brimming with the sights and scents of the turning season, and a message. 'Resentment rears its ugly head, and yet all things must end to begin again, to everything there is a season...'
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I like the idea we all have a
Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015
I like the idea we all have a different image of her face, which we do, but having mentioned it, you kind of step outside the poem and it becomes reality. Loved this one, but then I'm always saying that - coz it's true,
Read full commentPosted in Lucy in the Sky
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