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I have 1919 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3043383 times and 573 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1391 of my 12,511 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1432 votes

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A better earth

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A perfect creation but sin brought withdrawal of fullest protection – described as ‘the fall’: disease … their Master … promised …

Rash (?) Judgements

Be careful who you mock! … Be careful who you judge… Be careful – who do you accuse… debate respectfully, and hear!
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Extreme differences!

The elephant is heavy, the feather is light, … The elephant walks … the feather can fly if it’s …
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Dangers in the dark

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] What dangers when confusion reigns, and argument concerning what is good and right, rebellious claims that...
Cherry

Light for heaviness

With heavy heart he viewed the vast slums built, as industry growing fast drew crowds of workers – their daily grind hard, and cheer in liquor find … he whole vast slum soon seeing fewer bitter, angry, glum.
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1391 of my comments have received 1432 Great Feedback votes

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With all the brightness on

Posted on Sat, 08 Jun 2024

With all the brightness on the surface, it does leave me sad at the lack of openness, and maybe that connnects with Sanna's complicated life of relationships and never being able to settle down to family and children herself. Rhiannonn

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Posted in Beauty awakens the soul to act

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Perceptive of characters.

Posted on Sat, 25 May 2024

Perceptive of characters. Rhiannon

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Posted in Being rather silly

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An ode to twilight. You bring

Posted on Mon, 27 May 2024

An ode to twilight. You bring out so many views of the gentle changes. Years ago when we moved into the country I suddenly realised these flitting flyers in the dusk weren't late flying birds! Rhiannon

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Posted in Dusk

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You have captured how that

Posted on Sun, 26 May 2024

You have captured how that beauty can mature and change, but still be  beautiful as the seasons progress.

But there seems a wistful and poignancy that the use of the beauty has been to capture many lovers that can only end in hurt and...

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Posted in Mariangel

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It's a horrible picture

Posted on Fri, 24 May 2024

It's a horrible picture/scenario, but so it's meant to be. Your descriptive powers are well used!

There seems to be indication that one particular person who researched the possibilites of nucelar bomb could be guitly of unforgivable (no-...

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Posted in The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part Two of Two)

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sparkle of early sun on dew,

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

sparkle of early sun on dew, and the fragrances of damp nature warming up and the quiet and birdsong of a secluded place – lovely to evoke these. Rhiannon

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Posted in State Of Bliss

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wondering where you're taking

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

wondering where you're taking this! and all the filling-in that will be done. Rhiannon

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Posted in The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two)

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Extra part even more

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024

Extra part even more intriguing! Rhiannon

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Posted in "Book of All Answers"

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A clever idea of how to get a

Posted on Tue, 21 May 2024

A clever idea of how to get a fantasy started! Do you work out your story complete before starting posting detailed chapters? Rhiannon

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Posted in "Book of All Answers"

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An intersting extension on

Posted on Mon, 20 May 2024

An intersting extension on Pooh-type thoughts. I hadn't heard of Mullah Nasraddin so I looked him up, and it sounded as if like A A Milne could tease and stir basic thought! Make use of today, as far as possible! Rhiannon

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Posted in My Favourite Day

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