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You label this as autobiography . . .
Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015
I hope it's not so, but I don't think you would post such a thing if it wasn't. I was with you from the first line. You have detailed so well the confusion: guilt: fear that comes in spades after such a visit. Reading this, I felt it now almost...
Just catching up, with this excellent graphic description of a panic attack. I think I am lucky in that it is something I find difficult to comprehend since I guess I am rather laid back in some ways (which annoys some of those close to me)....
It's just so darn sad. Perfectly written of course. I think the thing that makes me sad about this is the never ending hopelessness of the writer, seemingly trapped in a circle of love and the fear of losing it.
Back in '64 my girlfriend and I visited one of her mates who lived in a nearly new South London (Bermondsey) tower block. At the time we bright-eyed teenagers thought it was great --- wonderful views and all that. It seemed so...
I know many people won't agree with me, but I've felt for many years now, that if there's a God, then there must be a Devil and religion was given to man by the Devil, thus damning God for the deaths carried out in his name.
You label this as autobiography . . .
Posted on Mon, 18 May 2015
I hope it's not so, but I don't think you would post such a thing if it wasn't. I was with you from the first line. You have detailed so well the confusion: guilt: fear that comes in spades after such a visit. Reading this, I felt it now almost...
Read full commentPosted in The Waiting Room
This sent a chill down my spine
Posted on Sun, 03 May 2015
Bee, this is heart wrenching. We can only guess at what he was told and why he cried.
So much in so few words excellent work
Ed
Posted in Big
CONGRATULATIONS!
Posted on Fri, 24 Apr 2015
As I mentioned before, this is a terrific piece regardless of form. Write it down anyway you want and it will be still be great.
Well done on this well deserved poem of the month
Ed
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Hi Bee
Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2015
Just catching up, with this excellent graphic description of a panic attack. I think I am lucky in that it is something I find difficult to comprehend since I guess I am rather laid back in some ways (which annoys some of those close to me)....
Read full commentPosted in Walk About a Bit
Dunno what to make of this, Bee.
Posted on Fri, 06 Mar 2015
It's just so darn sad. Perfectly written of course. I think the thing that makes me sad about this is the never ending hopelessness of the writer, seemingly trapped in a circle of love and the fear of losing it.
Very sensitively written...
Read full commentPosted in Déjà vu
Hi Tina,
Posted on Sun, 01 Mar 2015
Hi Tina,
Back in '64 my girlfriend and I visited one of her mates who lived in a nearly new South London (Bermondsey) tower block. At the time we bright-eyed teenagers thought it was great --- wonderful views and all that. It seemed so...
Read full commentPosted in The Beat Goes On
Hi Bee, powerful stuff.....
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
I know many people won't agree with me, but I've felt for many years now, that if there's a God, then there must be a Devil and religion was given to man by the Devil, thus damning God for the deaths carried out in his name.
It runs...
Read full commentPosted in Crime and Punishment
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