Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for You ...Part 12
The update went on rather longer than Vanessa had expected. She gave up on watching over him, there was something horrifying about seeing Spencer in...
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Make Millions in Two Minutes...
Today I was in my sprawling country estate in Scotland. I went wild swimming with my extremely macho chums, took down a stag then did some fishing...
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Parcel for you....Part 11
‘Spencer?’ ‘Yes,’ ‘Come here!’ Vanessa listened as he walked to the hall and stood over her. ‘These cartridges,’ she said, holding one up without...
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Parcel for you...Part 10
On the drive back from her mother’s house, a sense of guilt began to proliferate in the rear voids of Vanessa’s consciousness. At first she attempted...
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Brodie's Big Idea
‘I’m really impressed with what you’ve done in the garden, Brodie.’ Brodie flicked his oily hair and blinked, he didn’t like compliments. He already...
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York is ghost heavy isn't it,
Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024
York is ghost heavy isn't it, you can almost feel them brush against you as you walk around the city. The cryptic message, can it really be from the blonde shopaholic wife? I think I've said this before but your writing has a real unmistakable...
Read full commentPosted in The Golden Fleece (Part One of Two)
Hi Penny, I've only read some
Posted on Wed, 28 Feb 2024
Hi Penny, I've only read some of these chapters and have some catching up to do but I love your imagination, the character's names, the intriguing storylines and the lack of restrictions which hold the story within realms of magic.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 13
This makes me want to return
Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024
This makes me want to return to Cornwall, Jenny, I haven't been back for years, since a very cold Easter with the children. I hadn't heard of this lady, Mary Kelynack. She sounds like an absolute legend. What a life! I bet she slept well at night...
Read full commentPosted in The Fish Hawker
An extremely entertaining
Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2024
An extremely entertaining read Turlough and very funny in parts. What a character, from what you describe a cheerful, good spirited person despite his tendency to cadge what he wants rather than earn it through conventional means. Semi-ferel...
Read full commentPosted in Johnny Ten Levs
Magical. Those plants growing
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024
Magical. Those plants growing, 'in the wrong place', have no idea of their crime.
Read full commentPosted in Weeding
Sleeping in your car at this
Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024
Sleeping in your car at this time of year must be freezing and damp too. I used to give money to homeless but someone said it goes straight into the hands of criminal gangs so I stopped. If only the problem was improving. Our government can't/don...
Read full commentPosted in Five Inches.
This made me smile, Luigi. A
Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024
This made me smile, Luigi. A metalwork coarse was the closest I've come to alchemy. Vinegar and cod liver oil sound like a remedy for modern ailments.
Read full commentPosted in Chemistry (sort of)
I hope something can be done
Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2024
I hope something can be done to minimise this lady's suffering. You're correct about dogs; when my dog reached the end I was very careful to detach myself emotionally so that his suffering was minimal. I'm with you on TKMaxx, I'm not near one...
Read full commentPosted in NIAMH.
A mosaic of eclectic humour,
Posted on Tue, 20 Feb 2024
A mosaic of eclectic humour, like looking at a handful of colourful photographs held together with a theme, getting older?
Read full commentPosted in Afternoons Without Spoons
Very powerful as others have
Posted on Sat, 17 Feb 2024
Very powerful as others have said. The idea of violence perhaps a more uplifting and empowering respite from the grief, especially since your daughter's death was avoidable. I can imagine the twists and turns of anger being straightened,...
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