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I have 1204 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3406495 times and 1234 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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Boomtown

Podge clutched at the soft fitting on the chair and it helped pull himself upright. Glanced at the pints and tumblers on their table and lifted a...
Gold cherry

Head scratching.

The One Who Must Choose In some traditions (Norse, Slavic, Celtic), fate is flexible. The naked dreamer stands at a crossroads, exposed but empowered...
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Gold cherry

McCann case 5

She tugged the high-viz a little over her big belly as they walked back. A rattle in his throat. He dropped back a step, holding a hand up to show he...
Cherry

McCann case 4

He was close enough to the other workers to be part of the huddled group of smoker, but far enough away not to get involved. Non-smokers stumbled...
Cherry

Pass the Penny Story Challenge 10.

Jenny wanted to wrap herself in the bearskin rug on the cabin floor and take refuge in the forest. She didn’t want to kill anybody, but her daughter...

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1831 of my comments have received 1882 Great Feedback votes

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glaze (or gaze) both work

Posted on Wed, 15 Apr 2026

glaze (or gaze) both work equally? But some are more equal than others. I suspect we give are the suspects we get. Brain rot has a lot to answer for. I'm not really English. More alienish. 

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Posted in Penny's Pass the Story - Part 10

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This is exactly the right

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2026

This is exactly the right size and shape. I wonder what new doors it will open and by whom? 

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Posted in Penny’s Pass the Parcel - Part 7

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I pride myself on being able

Posted on Mon, 16 Mar 2026

I pride myself on being able to mss the most obvious clues. But unfunnily enough, I do know a Snodgrass. I'll go first and leave the solving to better sleuths. 

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Posted in "Penny's Pass the Story"

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ah, superpowers. I'd love one

Posted on Sun, 08 Sep 2024

ah, superpowers. I'd love one, but the price is too high. 

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Posted in A hundred moments in autism - A trip to the cinema

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I used to get hot flushes

Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024

I used to get hot flushes when I tried to talk to any beautiful girls I'd been at school with. I used the 15 pints and I was ready to roar, rather than the Erazofuge. As I got older I tried cutting down to a reasonable 12 pints. But I had to up...

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Posted in Erazofuge

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tragic, like you I don't have

Posted on Sat, 01 Dec 2018

tragic, like you I don't have an answer. Poverty, not morals is the key. We use the latter as a scapegoat, a standared practice by, for example, Jenhovah Witnesses to get a foot in the door, is to say how much worse the world is getting. They've...

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Posted in When Death Comes Too Soon

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the bit about trying to write

Posted on Tue, 02 Jun 2026

the bit about trying to write 3 in a different way. Lying down. Sideways. As a four or two. That shows how scrambled you were. And it's great writing. 

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Posted in Tom All Alone 17 (i)

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you made the crooked road run

Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2026

you made the crooked road run straight. Crime doesn't pay. Or so they say. 

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Posted in Penny's Pass The Story - Part 10.

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I certainly don't know what

Posted on Thu, 09 Apr 2026

I certainly don't know what to say. Which is a worry. Best just shoot somebody?  

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Posted in "Pass the Story" Chapter 9

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Lovely, he's not done.

Posted on Sat, 04 Apr 2026

Lovely, he's not done. Neither am I or think I'm not, but maybe. 

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Posted in Since April

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