The Lift

By Adriankane

This is one of my first short stories. As with all my work, it sways towards graphic horror. I appologise in advance for ny upset caused...... You have been warned

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Submitted by Adriankane on
Hi. I would be most grateful if I could get some honest feedback on my story. I know it may not be everyone's cup of tea but please give it a go...... Thanks
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THE LIFT

By Adriankane on Mon, 13 Feb 2006

The Lift- tweaked version Carl Walsh nervously pulled at the knot in the tie round his neck, his shirt already starting to become stained with perspiration. He jabbed repeatedly at the silver button on the wall with his free hand.
Autobiography
Story
Certificate 18

Bullied

By Adriankane on Fri, 07 Apr 2006

Bullied Sweat beaded on Charlie Bowers' forehead, before gravity dragged it round the contours of his paunchy face. He swallowed hard, trying to flatten his ample frame against the wall. Charlie heard the door to the basement slam shut, echoing between the boilers and pipes. The sound of voices soon replaced the thundering echo.
Horror
Story
Certificate 18