Naughty but nice

First draft of my short story

NAUGHTY BUT NICE?: an éclair to die for - Chapter 2

Lathom had rehearsed the approach to the target and the timing of the killing, but now it was for real and so as usual he felt hungry.

NAUGHTY BUT NICE?: an éclair to die for - Chapter 3

The client wasn’t going anywhere. He was just killing time until Lathom chose to kill him.

NAUGHTY BUT NICE?: an éclair to die for - Chapter 4

How had they found him? He thought he had been so careful. Well, he would worry about that later, if he had a later .

NAUGHTY BUT NICE?: an éclair to die for - Chapter 5

He lay at Lathom’s feet a large pool of blood soaking into the snow, the phone by his side.

NAUGHTY BUT NICE?: an éclair to die for - Chapter 6

He saw the sihouette of the man’s head as the security light came on and fired. Click! Click! The gun had jammed.

NAUGHTY BUT NICE?: an éclair to die for - Chapter 7

The bullet had hit him in the throat, his hands came up as though trying to stem the flow of blood and he toppled forward.