Conserve with Grandma

Much like the author, in fact.

I liked this, use of jam in poems is always a sure hit. Strong image to end on too. http://www.abctales.com/rokkitnite/conserve_with_grandma

I liked this, use of jam in poems is always a sure hit. Strong image to end on too. http://www.abctales.com/rokkitnite/conserve_with_grandma

I like the contrast of the youthful "deeply held convictions" and the older lady's "half-submerged beliefs". Interesting that you feminise the point-of-view by use of the word "blouse" when you could have just as easily written "shirt".

love the arctic flag and the teaspoon joystick. span