slowly and with feeling by georgie

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slowly and with feeling by georgie

http://www.abctales.com/story/georgie/slowly-and-with-feeling

This was a cracking piece of prose. I've got a short attention span when reading on screen but I read it straight through and thought it was a wonderful, well constructed piece of writing.
Wry observations of people's behaviours and foibles, and the descriptions of the journalisit school setting were spot on and very funny.
Welcome to the site Georgie.
If I had my way I'd sling this a cherry.
(I could say more but I just hope that by flagging it, more people will read it. I'm no master of the crit.)

That was very good, made my lunchbreak.

 

Thank you both for your kind words and warm welcome! I'm still getting accustomed to the site and such, and doing a bit of reading. Some impressive stuff. Please note that I do not share (all of) the cynical views of Graeme in my story, neither do I have his potty mouth!
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