thank you so much Camilla. Prose is my normal style and i know my poetry is very much beginners stuff, but in recent months i had a real desire to get to grips with understanding poetry - hence my attempts to put that study into practise.
and the link
http://www.abctales.com/story/juliet-oc/alabaster
would appreciate some crit on what's wrong/right with it from any poets out there.
Juliet
Juliet